Okay I think i have a realy cool idea for my novel. It is going to take place in Missori and the main character's name is Tom James. Here is a prologue from my novel.
Almost everyone is getting sick. The enviornment is almost vacant and the air filled with a distinctive stench, almost like garbage and vomit. What could have cause this sickness. The mayor says nothing can be done other than protecting youself from the spreading bacteria. Try hard to stay in your house and be cautiouse of who you trust. How will i know if i have the sickness? Im beginning to wonder how long this town will last?, how long will i last?
Hi Alexis,
ReplyDeleteI think you're starting it out very well; especially the second sentence which was describing the horrible smell of the environment. Since this is only your prologue, I probably won't be too critical. But be sure to continue to use sensory details throughout your novel!
Your novel seems like it's going to be very interesting by the way.
-Tiara :)