January 14, 1963
Its wednsday, i realy hate wednsdays. I moved in a small town in Missori to find peace. I This town is realy wierd, everyone is always in their houses like scared children. The pierce through your souls as the watch you walk by past their curtans. Maybe it is because the sun is always beaming on you as it burns through your skin and gives you sunburn. Or is it because of something else? Are they trying to hide someting?
I have to be honest im deplore of my desicion to move here in Missori. This town is poor, not poor I mean you cant even get a job around here. Everything is abbanded like everyone is rich and have better lives than getting a job. Its realy blase also. Ill wait to see what ill do.
You have a lot of spelling/grammar errors but that's okay because it's just a rough draft and I understand that. When you have time, you should fix them. Other than that, you are off to a good start. Continue to describe the setting and the characters more vividly.
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